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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 20A
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“You have all weekend. Let me show you the place.”
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Upstairs, Carmen was showing Dana where she’d stay over the next couple of days. “Okay, so this is your room. There’s a connecting bathroom, but the room next door is where Shane and I are stayin’. The bathroom doors lock, of course.”
“Cool.” Dana’s mind instantly went to The Brady Bunch and that reminded her of a conversation she had had with Alice about the number of bathrooms in the Brady home. Was everything going to bring Alice to the forefront of her mind? She thought so.
“There’s a safe for valuables in case you forget to key in your combination to lock the door when you’re out. To lock the door. . .” Carmen began, then reached into her pocket and pulled out a blank corner piece of a sheet of paper and looked down pretending to read it. “Your code is DANA1. DANA1 locks, DANA1 unlocks. It makes it easy for security. If you have problems with it, pick up the phone and dial downstairs. Oh, and another thing, not that I know that there are hidden cameras in the house, but after the whole Mark thing, I kinda freak out about that shit. Anyway, just so you know, if you’re going to have sex, do it in the dark or under the sheets.
“Carmen! I’m not here for that. God, when you break up do you go out and look for a little someone to get you through the night?”
“Uh, no. I’ve always been the little someone that they come to.” Carmen said sadly, hoping Shane wouldn’t be another in a long list of lovers who leapt.
“Sorry.”
“That’s my past. I’m so over it. Hey, I’m going to start my set in about 2 hours, so you might wanna get some food. If you want to just stay up here, all you have to do is call downstairs and one of the catering staff will bring something up for you. You saw the spread. If you can eat it, they have it, so you can request anything at all.
“Okay. I think I’ll want to get out and mingle, a little.”
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Early Merry Christmas to us for getting an update! *doing a happy dance* Be back at some point for a real comment. lol
I’m really pleased to see a new chapter so soon. Excellent plan by Shane and Carmen to get Al and Dana back together. I have a good feeling that it’ll work. Dylan and Hels, what can I say? They’re hot. I dunno how they’re going to get rid of Danny completely, but I’d think besting him would be easy, because he’s a complete idiot. Can’t the Peabody billions just hire a couple of thugs to muscle his sorry behind out of LA? Bette and Tina: Eureka! I think Porter’s got it! I cannot *wait* for Nicastro, Colley, Marcos and any other hatahs to get put in their place. And last but not least, you actually made me like Henry. Maybe it’s Christmas cheer, maybe it’s that you gave him a heart. Either way, I’m very glad you posted, great chapter, and dare I ask that you post again soon? Why yes. Yes, I do. (She who dares, wins!) Post soon, please!
omg omg, I can’t believe you’ve posted again, so soon….Wow, how lucky are we, and regardless is you give us 30+ pages or 60+…it’s great all thru…No, I don’t wan’t this to end, we need to continue it to your version of S4 then S5….pls pls…Tks for your dedication portia
Thank you so much for posting so soon…I loved how you reversed the pov of the infamous photo. Good plan by Shane&Carmen,last chance for Dana & Alice and they better make good use of it. Great news all around for Bette & Tina. I hope Tina’s dream will be a beautiful one this time around. Thank you!
OMG you’re genius for getting danish back together, throw in some hot steamy danish making up and I’ll worship you forever lol :P
wow… i love this story… and i even like your henry now… i love how you are tying everything together… and i can’t wait till your next post…
i so hope that bette’s plan will work, tina will have dreams about bette and angie, and also for al and dana will work things out…thanks for this chapter, i hope that they all can have happy endings
You made me happy Portia and my monday a little less dreary! Merry X-mas to me!
Thank you for posting this chapter. Happy Holidays!
Shane covered her mouth with her hand to keep from laughing. When she was six or seven, she thought that the words lavatory and laboratory were the same words. Her father had caught her with a glass Pyrex dish and a steak knife in the bathroom on her knees, pulling her poop out of the toilet to begin some experiments in her laboratory. She recalled that her dad threw away the baking dish. – LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Nicastro has got to GO! At least Bette got the ok from Henry to see Tina and that Bette is working on a plan. Helena and Dylan was freakin’ HOT!!!!!!!
Ahem…”I only know what I know…the passing chapters will show…you’ve kept TiBette love so alive and so new…cause time after time you’ll hear me say that I’m so lucky to be reading you…Thank you!
Here’s my vote [X] for best reconceptualization of Season 3. I raise my glass in toast to your excellent series. Thanks Portia!
Brilliant. I like the ending of this chapter soooo much better than the last. Lots of good scenes in this chapter from funny to sexy. Thank you so much for this top notch story.
The day seemed to end too perfect for B&T what drama do you have planned next? I just want Tina to get better and get up out of that hospital real soon. Stephanie is going to get the help she needs in jail if she keep taking that man’s money. Thank you for another wonderful chapter.
What a brilliant chapter. I’m glad that Bette didn’t end up in the slammer! I can’t believe that Whit wouldn’t have thought of the new Power of Attorney if that was plausable…I’m not seeing that as a viable option,,,get to the retreat, Bette!
Beautiful story! Helena & Dylan are hot!pps. thank you!