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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
"Fuck. Ah, fuck," Tina said and moaned loudly. “Like that.”
Bette had never involved herself in any kind of sexual bondage or physical domination with Tina or anyone else. She didn’t like the idea of restraining Tina with scarves or cuffs and there would never come a time in her life when she’d allow someone to handcuff or tie her up. However, looking at Tina’s ass in the air and being allowed this freedom to explore anything she pleased, Bette did want to spank her. She debated in her mind—would this be something Tina would like; things were good between them, it wouldn’t come out of anger or frustration; a light spanking would be playful. Her free hand, the one that wasn’t buried inside her woman came up and she tenderly caressed Tina’s ass. A few seconds later, Bette squeezed her cheek, digging into the flesh, then immediately softening the pressure, rubbing the skin that was turning a light pink. She squeezed Tina’s ass again, harder this time and once more she opened her hand; her entire palm gently taking away any twinge of pain.
Tina was feeling no pain, however. She was pushing back, letting Bette go as deep as she desired. She moaned. It felt perfect, but she could feel Bette hesitating, like she wasn’t giving all of her attention to filling her. She was really into the way Bette’s other hand was touching her. Tina lifted her head, turned, looked back at her. “Nothing’s off limits, baby.” She urged, “C’mon.”
Bette gritted her teeth, going over the thought once more before she lightly slapped Tina’s ass. Tina groaned, encouraging her to continue. Bette slapped her again. Tina exhaled several times and hissed. The next time, the slap was louder and a bit harder.
“Is this okay?”
“Yes,” she said breathlessly. “Don’t ask.”
Bette slapped again, but she stopped. It had been different, naughty, and somewhat exciting, but it wasn’t what she liked, it didn’t turn her on as much as she thought it might. Bette pushed deeper, her own body moved in as well. Her abdomen brushed against Tina’s ass and she moaned, too. Bette listened to the rain, heard Tina’s pants and sighs, heard her own voice harmonizing with Tina’s.
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.