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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
Tina didn’t ask, but Bette felt Tina pushing back harder and harder against her fingers; she wanted more, wanted Bette deeper, needed Bette to go faster. Bette did. “Take my fingers, baby.”
“I am,” Tina said and accompanied it with a husky groan of pleasure. Her head dropped back onto her arms that were crossed in front of her. The fingers on her right hand dug into her left arm and vice versa. She was having a hard time holding back. Something inside of Tina needed the rawness of it and she needed Bette to experience it, too. Tina had wanted Bette to be fierce and in control tonight, but not in the way Bette normally took control. She didn’t want Bette to be a gentle, loving partner as she always was, making sure Tina was pleased and sated. She wanted to see her take control by losing it. Tina knew that Bette craved sexual release when she was frustrated and nothing had been frustrating her more than her job. If she could give Bette this night of pure release without pressure, she’d gladly do it. Bette was half-drunk, enjoying the sound of rain, the smell of rain in the air, the deep blues and bright whites that made up an emotional work of art still shining on the closet door, and over their skin, and Tina was offering up her body in a delightful way. All of that made for a freedom that was seldom part of their lovemaking.
“Fuck me harder.” Tina’s face contorted with pleasure and she began to push even harder against those long fingers. Bette was kneeling and scrunched low on the bed, her face near Tina’s ass and she surprised herself when her tongue came out and she ran it down the crack of Tina’s butt.
“Oh, my God,” Tina cried. It was unexpected, but so welcomed. “Yes.”
Bette grinned when she felt a sudden rush of fluid cover her fingers. Her tongue licked over her cheeks and then pushed pointedly back against the top of her crack, sliding down slowly, opening Tina wider, burying her face deeper.
“Fuck, Bette. Fuck.” Tina’s inner walls contracted against Bette’s fingers. She wanted so much more and she wanted to give so much. Tina was overcome with want and need, but more powerfully, her unshakeable love for Bette. She was so open for her, to her, so willing to receive any and everything Bette gave. She moaned in sweet desire. “I’m yours. You own me.”
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.