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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
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Bette needed to take her this way as much as Tina demanded it. As she pushed deeper, trying to reach the spot that would calm them both, Bette felt herself begin to tremble in love. She took Tina with no inhibition, with complete abandon. Rachel Yamagata sang, Be Be Your Love.
Three fingers weren’t enough. Bette added her pinkie and Tina cried out. “God, yes. Oh, my God. Oh, my God. God, baby, yes.”
“Squeeze my fingers, Tee. Take them. I’m so deep inside you. So good.”
Tina closed her eyes. The long hair that grew from near her temples had fallen loose from the ponytail and now were draped over her arms, hanging down damp and limp. Her forehead that rested on her crossed arms was beaded with sweat and stuck to her arms. “F-f-feel me cuh-cuh. . . Oh, God, Bette. I’m com–. Feel me.”
“Yes.” Bette sucked in air. She was perspiring.
“Don’t stop. Don’t. Don’t.”
It took just a few more well-paced and well-placed strokes and Tina was true to her word. She climaxed powerfully, her body giving out entirely and Bette slipped her fingers out and dropped on top of Tina.
Tina seemed to be in need of rest, but Bette wasn’t. She grinded on top of her, but soon, Tina turned onto her back. Bette looked down at her, bent, kissed her. Tina smiled up. “Amazing.”
Bette’s eyes traveled down Tina’s body. She pushed back, bent again, but this time not for Tina’s mouth, but her breasts. Carefully, she sucked one, then moved to the other, back to the first, then across her chest to wrap her lips around the other.
Tina moaned. “I like it.”
“Me, too.”
“Open yourself up. Spread your lips,” Tina said. Again, asking was not on tonight’s agenda.
Bette looked at her.
“Go on. I want to see your clit, baby. Let me see it.”
Bette lifted, moved her right hand between her legs, stared at Tina and teased her by moving her hand away, not showing her what she wanted to see. Tina reached up, draped her hands over Bette’s breasts. She squeezed Bette’s breasts, then pulled on her nipples. Bette moaned. Tina continued to play with them, watched Bette’s muscular abdomen contract and twitch, and then Tina’s left hand moved from Bette’s right breast and raced down Bette’s arm, grabbed her fingers and moved Bette’s right hand back to where it had been. “Let me see your clit.”
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‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.