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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
Bette seldom talked dirty, but she loved hearing it. She was happy talking in intellectual/spiritual terms—she could talk about her yoni, Tina’s yoni—a sweet word for their sexual center. But she liked Tina’s dirty talk and she remembered that Tina had heard her use those same dirty words on a phone call several months ago. Bette spread her outer lips and looked down at Tina who watched intently. Tina wanted to feel her now. She pushed Bette down against her leg.
Bette was bent over Tina, their breasts pressed together, nipples caught on each others. Bette’s hips moved back and forth, pressing her clitoris over Tina’s leg. “Ah-ah. Uh-uh-oh-uh.” She hissed. “Oh-oh.” Tina’s hand reached down and sailed over Bette’s ass, pushing her harder against her leg.
With Bette on top of her, Tina’s hand squeezed between them to touch herself. Her forefinger slid over her clit. Bette was holding herself up with her left arm, but it started to give as she moved closer to a climax. Her forearm trapped Tina’s right arm against the linen. Bette was groaning. She looked down and watched Tina’s face wrinkle and her mouth twist in her self-pleasure. “Ah, fuck.”
John Mayer was telling Bette and Tina that their bodies were wonderlands through the speakers. He sang while Bette discovered Tina discovering her.
Bette grinded against Tina’s leg. It was easy to slide over it as Tina’s leg was wet with Bette’s fluid. Bette moaned louder and louder. She was so into what she was doing that she missed Tina stop fingering her own clit. Bette was surprised when she felt Tina scooting down the bed, while pushing Bette forward. “On my face.” Again, Tina didn’t ask. Bette climbed up the bed, up Tina’s body, and lowered herself onto Tina’s mouth. She was equally surprised when Tina placed her hands on Bette’s waist and pushed her down hard on top of her. Tina’s nose was crushed by Bette. Bette’s fingers curled around the upper part of the head board. She clung to it when Tina’s tongue started moving over her. Bette moved up slightly giving Tina a bit of breathing space.
Tina’s tongue swiped over her, licking the slick inside of her lips and then her tongue barely moved at all once as she rested between Bette’s inner lips and her clit. The motion was scant, but the pleasure it gave was tremendous. “Uh-uh-uh.” Bette bit her bottom lip. Tina shook her head, her nose bumping over Bette’s clitoris over and over, back and forth. Bette hissed.
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.