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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
Tina moaned and her tongue slipped out and didn’t miss a beat. The warm wet muscle slid over Bette’s clit, up and down her vulva, round and round her center. Tina made letters and designs, circles and spirals against Bette. Bette’s legs flopped open, bounced on the mattress while her hand ran through Tina’s hair. “Fuck me.” She grabbed Tina’s arm and tried to get her to put her fingers inside.
“Tell me what you want and why you want it.”
Bette’s head turned on the pillow, stared off into space, unable to come up with the words. Her heart pounded, her body ached. She needed to be penetrated and needed Tina’s finger on her clitoris. “My-my. . . Tina please. Your pussy. . . needs your fingers.” She grabbed for Tina’s arm again, this time yanked it, demanded it. “Fuck me.” Bette sat up and Tina scurried up as well, kneeling beside Bette. “Put your fingers in me.”
“Why?”
“I want to feel you in me. I-I . . . Oh, fuck Tina. I want you to make me come.”
Tina grinned and held up her hand. Her thumb crossed over her palm as she showed Bette four fingers. Tina sucked them into her mouth, popped them out, and showed Bette the saliva she had placed on them, not that Bette needed any additional lubrication. Tina moved her arm around Bette’s leg and slipped inside her.
Bette was full and the throbbing and clutching around Tina’s fingers thrilled them both. “Keep talking to me. I wanna hear you the whole time I’m in you,” Tina instructed.
“Ah-ah. Oh my fucking God.”
“What?”
Bette bared her teeth, her eyes rolled up in her head, and she pounded her fists against the mattress, then bunched the sheet in her hands, tightening her fingers around the fabric. “Fuck. Baby, fuck me.”
“Tell me how, Bette.”
“Like you love me. Like you’ll never leave me.”
“I’ll never leave you.” Tina’s fingers were as deep inside her as she could get. Her knuckles bumped against Bette’s vulva, Bette sighed and moaned.
“Love me like that.”
Tina leaned over her, perspiration poured from her forehead and fell onto Bette’s thigh. Tina bent, stuck out her tongue, and glided over the slit, touching Bette’s hard clitoris in the process.
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.