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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
“Your pussy’s so wet.”
Bette looked down at her between her locked arms. She stared down at Tina’s forehead and watched her head move left and right on the pillow. Tina’s hands were on Bette’s butt, squeezing and releasing as she ate her out. “I love this pussy,” Tina muttered, barely audible. “This is mine.”
Bette’s eyes were closed, her head back, her chest heaving, legs trembling. Her mouth hung open and her moans were non-stop.
“Tell me it’s mine.”
“Yours,” Bette said weakly.
“I can’t hear you.”
“Yours. This is yours.”
“What’s mine?”
“This pussy belongs to you. Eat me, Tee. Eat my. . . “ She hesitated and Tina slapped her ass.
“What?” Tina’s mouth moved away and she held Bette in a way that prevented her from squashing against her face again. "What?" she demanded an answer because the one she had heard wasn’t the right one.
"Eat your pussy. It’s yours, baby. Eat this." Bette patted her triangle. "Please. It’s yours." Bette grimaced and begged.
"That’s right," Tina said. She pulled her down again. "You’re dripping. You’re soaked. Feels good.” Tina was quiet now as she made the letter ‘R’ with her tongue and Bette cried out.
“Tongue fuck me,” Bette begged.
Tina pushed Bette off of her and tossed her onto her back. If Bette thought Tina wouldn’t top her tonight, she was wrong. Bette would beg and plead all night. She was being topped by Tina and liked it. Tina scrambled down the bed, pulling on Bette’s breasts, biting the upper part of her right breast before going down further. “Tongue, Tee. Please.”
Between her legs, Tina looked up at Bette whose head was tucked, her chin resting at the top of her chest as she watched Tina. Tina stuck out her tongue, making it long and slim, showing Bette what would be going inside her. She heard her whimper just before her mouth was back between her legs.
There was no way she wanted to hurt Tina, but she had no control over her body. Bette reached down, her fingers dug into Tina’s back, right below her shoulder. She scratched across it as her hips moved and her body came up, lowered, rose again. Tina stayed with her, rubbing the corners of her lips against Bette’s labia while her tongue went in and out of Bette’s hole. “Oh, fuck.”
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.