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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B
Bette laughed nervously. This was not her style. "Tee?" she questioned.
"I just wanna fuck you and want you to fuck me." Tina moved her head away from Bette’s neck so she could look at her. "I want you to lose yourself, Bette. Don’t be safe. Tonight, just be free and let go of everything. I want everything from you tonight."
Bette laughed again, but Tina kept looking at her, letting her know she was quite serious. Gently, she pushed Bette off of her so that they were side by side. Tina brushed away some of the soft tendrils of hair that had fallen over Bette’s eyes. She looked at her. "If you want to be rough, rough is good."
"What?" Bette said. Again, Tina surprised her. "Wh-what?"
Tina didn’t explain, but she moved her hand down, and squeezed, then twisted Bette’s nipple. Bette groaned loudly and her eyes closed in painful ecstasy. "Oh, God."
"That’s what I want. I’m not going to ask again. That’s how I’m going to give it to you, baby. I’m not going to tell you again. Anyway we like it. Tonight, we’re gonna have it. I won’t say no to anything." She trusted Bette. Bette wouldn’t cause her harm or degradation, but she knew Bette’ could bring her to new heights of pleasure if she let them.
Bette pulled her to her and kissed her with the passion that was normally held in check. The kiss was forceful. Her fingers dug into Tina’s shoulder, gripping the flesh hard, leaving half moon prints from her nails on Tina’s skin. Tina groaned.
Bette’s hand went to Tina’s waist, then lower as she moved her body over hers. Bette moved her hand up and down Tina’s leg, rubbing the outside of her thigh, then she pushed Tina’s leg up, bending it at the knee, spread her legs open, and stared down at what she wanted. Tina’s lips were parted and her tongue peeked out as she licked her lips, watched, waited. “You want me to fuck you. That’s what I want,” Bette said. She didn’t ask and without ceremony, without making certain she was ready because she knew she would be, without performing the foreplay that always preceded this, Bette’s three fingers pushed inside Tina, pressed deep into her, and she began to fuck her. Tina breathed out, her eyes shuttered briefly, and her mouth twitched out her excitement. She moaned. "Oh. Oh. Oh." With each thrust of Bette’s fingers, Tina responded vocally. “Ah, ah. Oh.” Tina sucked in air between her teeth, hissing a breath in and exhaling a sigh.
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(72 votes, average: 3.89 out of 5)
‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!
I am awed. Incredible plotting, great pacing, wonderful imagery. And so hot. Thanks so much for this incredible chapter.
excellent as always buddy…you’re the greatest of the greatest if that makes sense lol i love this fic pps!
OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…
Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)
OMG!!!!!! I miss this story! Pretty please continue!
Wow I just finished reading. I agree with everyone. If you can please continue this.
Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.
What can I Say – wow – great update thank you so much.
A fan fiction timeline: In the beginning: Bring it all on. … After Portia: It’s done been broughten.
Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.
I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS
loved it!!!! pps
I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.
You have to finish this! I read this entire series in 6 weeks, and can’t wait to see what happens in the end. So much better than the show.