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Now Kit talks and Bette listens
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Bette kissed Tina on the cheek and squeezed Sam’s shoulder as she passed by but was sure not to peek as they wanted to surprise her with the finished product. She walked over to Francesca who was reclining on the leather couch on the other side of room. She had her feet elevated on a pillow. Bette lifted Francesca’s legs and removed the pillow. She sat in its place and lifted Francesca’s feet onto her lap. She noticed the swollen ankles and gently massaged them then rubbed her feet as Francesca relaxed into the touch.
“Thank you. That feels amazing.”
“Other than the swelling how are you feeling?”
“I’m doing fine. Alex is moving around a bit. He’s still excited from all the celebration today. It was a really nice party Bette.”
“Yes it was. I think everyone enjoyed themselves. I saw you out on the dance floor a few times. You have some pretty good moves.” Bette increased the pressure on the foot massage guessing that the dancing was partially responsible. She smiled at Francesca’s slight blush.
“I love dancing. It was one of the things that Marcus and I did together a lot. Have you seen him dance the Samba?”
“Not only have I seen him we danced it together at a party. It was amazing. Everyone just stopped dancing and made a circle around us to watch.”
“I wish I could have seen that. I bet you two made a striking pair.”
“Everyone thought we were brother and sister but I don’t think you can dance such a sexy dance with a sibling without it seeming incestuous. We had a good laugh over that.”
“I really miss Marcus. I know he and I agreed that he would stay in New York to finish the work for his art tour but I sort of wished he’d been here today. He would have loved hanging out with everyone; especially since it will be a couple of years before he’s back in the states.”
“Yeah I thought about that too.” Bette still had mixed feelings about Marcus’ role in her and the baby’s life.
“Bette, I called Marcus a while ago and we talked about it. I think I want him here for the birth.”
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Hope things get heated up quickly. Too slow for those two. Enjoyed it
wkm – is it too slow for Bette and Tina or are you getting impatient for things to heat up :-). I can’t promise fireworks because I don’t really get into writing NC17’s but they will break a sweat soon.
Good update. They are taking very slowly. I expect the weekend away will provoke opportunity for action.
azmama – the weekend will definitely provoke opportunity for action …
You made a comment early in this story (chapter 11) where you said “In order for this Bette and Tina coupling to work, Tina has to modify her life plans. At this point, she is physically attracted to Bette but nothing has occurred so right now it all seems so sterile, no panting, no sweating, no carnal desires have been revealed. Seems too much like an arrangement, all very platonic and business like. Looking forward to the next chapter”.
I responded that I thought their behavior was appropriate for the stage of their relationship at the time which was platonic friends but I also said that if you stuck with me I would address the supposed ‘lack of passion’. We’re almost there and they will have that conversation during the cabin weekend but there will also be ‘action’ to support it. I’m not an NC17 author and I don’t feel the need for graphic detail when the sex is implied but I hope you will see my point of view in having them take it very slowly – the main reason is they are not ready for sex for the sake of sex.
Now that’s what I call a post! Thank you!
Hope the Weekend away isn’t all cooking in the kitchen though!
Looking forward to reading 25b!
Hey SassyGran – thank you for continuing to read and for commenting. I promise they will do more than talk and cook during their weekend get-away. Remember this is also their date night weekend :-).
Hey bat, did you have a change of heart about Helena? I am not expecting an answer as I know you never give anything away about your stories, but it was just too tempting reading that Winnie and Helena are going to the Planet together and about their interaction during the baby shower. Glad Bette and Tina are going to take some time out to just be together without any distraction. They really need to discuss how they are going to proceed with everything that is happening and what they expect from the other. Thank you so much for taking the time to re-post this intriguing story.
Hey as1219 – Thanks for commenting. No I won’t give anything away but as is my usual style in writing these stories you can expect me to introduce a lot of different directions in the storyline as I set up future chapters. I try not to be too predictable or redundant so hopefully I will keep the interest of the readers since I don’t do NC17’s – :-).
I did some heavy editing in this chapter (25/25a) and the next (25b) from when I originally wrote this story. I actually softened Bette’s character a little because she was sounding like a commando but I didn’t change Helena. You were very observant to pick up on the Helena/Winnie match-up because if Helena does change for the better Winnie has something to do with it.
Thanks for reading and for checking up on me.
Great chapter BAT!! I actually like the progression of Bette and Tina in this story and look forward to their upcoming date weekend and interaction…Helena/Winnie of course I saw that one coming
I like your story and appreciate the way
Bette and Tina you take relationship, I confess
I’m a fan nc 17 this is true, however
I never fail to enjoy a great history as
this, just because they do not have a Nc: 17.
I love this charm that this discovery is
Bette and Tina, I love those moments of conversation
they have with small moments of snogging,
you write without elaborating.
10 Stars.
Note: My reading is delayed with many history
and am trying to upgrade it
December is Christmas and New Year, and the
Bethlehem Airport becomes a boiler of people
coming and going