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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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“You read the last page didn’t you” Tina gently chastised while walking the final distance to their bed and sat on the edge.
“Sorry I couldn’t resist…..I needed to see if we ended up together” Bette offered as way of an explanation.
Tina laughed at the ridiculousness of Bette’s excuse “What did you expect, you walking off into the sunset with Bunny Boiler”
“Funny Tina” Bette said sarcastically “The last thing I expected was a letter to your family”
“You know my biggest regret is not telling them about us and I know it sounds crazy but I started to write this letter telling them everything I should have told them before ” Tina paused as her sadness threatened overwhelm her, Bette gently pulled her to lie on her chest and cocooned Tina in her arms, immediately Tina felt strong enough to continue “I started the first week you went back to school but I couldn’t get past Dear Mum, Dad and Christopher without breaking down….then I figured if the aim of this letter was to tell them about you and I that’s exactly what I should do….and as you’ve already read I started at the day we first met then I guess it just took on a life of it’s own” Tina tilted her head back so she could look at Bette “I was thinking that when I get home that we could visit them…..and maybe read it to them together”
Bette looked a little puzzled at Tina’s use of the word home when talking about their upcoming trip to LA.
“You think it’s too weird huh” Tina said misreading Bette’s facial expression.
“Hell no I don’t think it’s too weird….besides it will give me a chance to tell them that they don’t have to worry about their beautiful amazing daughter who just when I think I couldn’t possible love anymore does something else that takes my breath away and proves me wrong” Bette leans forward and kisses Tina fully intent on showing her exactly how much she was loved until a stray thought filled her with apprehension.
“Tina exactly how much detail have you written about our sex life I only got as far as our first kiss when curiosity got the better of me and that was vivid”
Tina chuckled “Are you asking me if I have mentioned your insatiable need for chocolate…or if I dared to write and I quote “Oh my god Tina it tastes so good”
“Tina you haven’t” Bette made a move to grab the bounded writings she had laid on the bed next to them but Tina was too quick and managed to get them before her, Tina leapt off the bed and was half way towards the kitchen.
“That will teach you Porter to skip to the last page….you’ll have to wait now until we get to LA”
“You know I’ll find it” Bette called after her
“Not if I hide it in the kitchen”
Bette knew there was not a chance Tina would be so obvious to hide it in the kitchen as much as she knew she had little chance of finding it. She folded her arms behind her head and waited for Tina to return. Her thoughts returned to their upcoming holiday……was it just a slip of the tongue or did Tina really think of LA as home?
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Well, it was a dynamite update ;) lol. Great as usual. lol@BB. Hope Skimmer Jr. the First feels better. Oh, and that he at least managed to get out of exams.
It’s been a long time coming :) Thanks for the new chapter.
Skimmy…sorry to hear of your son’s accident, but despite it all thsi was a wonderful chapter…I wasn’t bored at all. In fact I was sooo not bored that I’d like some more, so when you get a chance do you think you can squeak out another one???
By the way, a really good story isn’t just about the end, it’s the journey that is the most interesting. That’s why people are sad when a good story ends.
I’m happy that I may read this story. :o) Thanks, how you write it.
Hey Skimmer!!! Glad to see u updated, was wondering where you were at these days. Hope your son’s wrist gets better. Thanks again Skimmy.
its true we know the ending but the paths and choices in between are just as important. thanks
Brilliant, awesome update, Skimmer. We know they end up together but reading their journey thru the years is what’s amazing. Hope you’re son’s better. Thank you again. Love this story :)
welcome back, last nite I was missing this story. best wishes to your son. hope he mends properly. Love the story. It doesn’t matter that I know they’re together-U filling in the details of their life makes for a fun, poignant, tense etc story. I do expect by now that T and H are indeed friends. Plz write when u can.
To my favorite author and friend I just read the chptr and i did’nt think it was boring at all, and i am soo in the mood for chocolate.
Oh yea i do have a smile on my face
I hope your son is feeling better skimmer. I enjoyed this chapter very much – the letter is such a sweet idea of Tina’s and them reading it to her parents makes it even sweeter. Thanks and please post when you can.
That was wonderful and funny. Please post more, thanks!
How could I ever be bored of this story? As toby4ever said, it’s the journey that’s so interesting, and I’m loving reading about how they got to where they are. Glad your son’s on the mend. Thanks and post more when you can. Cheers Skimmer! :)
welcome back…i am intrigued.