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The Laws of Attraction: Part Eighteen
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Understanding the point of view from Dana and Howie, Alice scooted her chair closer to the teenager and offered in a soft murmur, “She was worried about you yesterday and you know how she gets when she’s worried. It leads to her being scared.” She tilted her head and prompted him fondly, “And what does Dana do when she’s scared?”
“She becomes super annoying and anal,” said Howie, rolling his eyes. He poked at the eggs some more then looked at Alice with an apprehensive hazel gaze. Why wont she talk to me about this? Biting his lip in a gesture that reminded the blonde completely of Dana, he continued, I thought she would talk to me first, you know? That she would know why Im here. Howie released an exasperated sigh and scuffed his shoe on the floor and looked at Alice again. You know why Im here, dont you?
I think so, said Alice kindly. But why dont you tell me? When Howies face darkened and he formed a scowl that to her was more of a hostile pout, she chuckled and nudged his arm. Im pretty sure I already know what youre going to say, kid. She smiled as he opened his mouth to no doubt protest or complain at her and cut him off by saying in easy tones, “Dont you think you could use the practice with saying the words?
Biting on his bottom lip and playing with his puka shell necklace for a long while, Howie stared at the kitchen table and finally said, Im *****.
Silence and then Howie felt Alice ruffling his curly hair before she pulled his head down to her shoulder with a rough gesture of affection he had grown to appreciate from her. She tapped him playfully onto the back of his head and muttered with a chuckle, Thats what I thought. When he peered up at her with slightly watery eyes, she wrapped an arm around his shoulder, squeezing him gently as she drawled humorously, Who other than a ***** boy could pick out such fabulous outfits, after all?
I know, right? Duh to big sis, Howie halfway sniffled and snickered, pulling his head from Alices shoulder. He poked at the eggs, shoving them around the plate, then said hesitantly, Will you–
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Sorry you had to repost because of all that editing stuff. Such a bummer. But this chapter is so freaking good. Seriously. The comedy was pricless: Fabulous Howie, the pancake breakfast burrito, Tonya’s surname and the angst was just so…dead-on. I love Gabby.
I can’t wait to see what happens next i do hope that alie sees dana before she does angthing silly with gabby because she is so bad for alice and alice alway ends up hurt please post soon
I so badly wanna see the whole “Be a Man” revue on film. That’s priceless comedy right there. Good work.
“And to be frank, you wouldn’t like Tonya when she was angry. You wouldn’t like her at all.” ROFLMAO…you are sooo talented!
I love this, really, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
hey drieser, i haven’t commented in awhile (my old username was danielle), and just thought i’d jump back in. firstly, i have to tell you that i am loving the way that you are writing howie… is he not the cutest kid brother or what?! i enjoyed that last chapter and how he over hears dana and alice having sex and complains about being corrupted.
and this time, him being all upset with her fans, lol. the mulan thing with ed was hilarious… where do you come up with these crazy scenarios?! i can’t believed that you brought the wonderful world of disney to Pride, lmao.
anyway, i am feeling alice’s pain right now, but i hope she does not let herself fall into the evil clutches of gabby deveaux.
i hope she and dane work it out and end up having some more great sex… and just for shits and giggles, howie should overhear them again.
but wait a minute?! when the heck is howie going to come out to her? i’ll be waiting…
oh and i almost forgot… when you busted out that SNL sketch with sean connery and alex trebbeck i nearly pissed myself… i cannot tell you how much laughter those sketches bring me, i love them.
ok, i have prattled on enough now, love your writing.. Do Go On!!!!
Thought you had posted early for a moment. Didn’t have a chance to comment on this chapter first time round though, so let me say: Alice and Howie, “Don’t you think you could use the practice saying the words” – I loved this scene, funny and tender; the breakfast burrito, and Dana’s reaction, made me laugh (once I googled Fruit Loops to find out what they were); and the ripping guitar solo, let’s just say the image distracted me from my work for quite a while. I know the angst must be coming, but looking forward to the next chapter.
Lovely once again. You really left it hanging there with the end. Trying to torture the Danishers, eh? I suppose it is for the best though. Wouldn’t be a good story with Gabby inflicting a little drama. Can’t wait for the update.