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The Laws of Attraction: Part Eighteen
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Im not telling Dana for you, said Alice firmly, scooping the eggs up with her fork and eating them. She groaned in pleasure and smiled largely. She makes the best eggs, doesnt she?
She totally stole the recipe from Marta, replied Howie in snippy tones, referring to the longtime Fairbanks family chef. Kicking Alice lightly with his Kenneth Cole sandals, he said in what was no doubt meant to be coaxing tones, Why not tell her for me? Too bad that his coaxing tones worked just about as well as Danas stern tones from earlier. Which was not at all. She likes you better than me. You have ***** with her.
Dana loves you, youre her little brother, said Alice, eating more of the eggs and not really caring who the tennis player stole the recipe from, they tasted so good. “And for my own sanity stop bringing up ***** in sentences involving your sister. It’s starting to freak me out.”
“Because you have a perverted mind,” said Howie, releasing a snort and leaning backwards and looking in the kitchen. Dana was busy cooking something in a frying pan. What he had no idea and he wasn’t sure he wanted to know. He had never been much of a breakfast person unless you counted eating cold pizza in the morning. When he saw that Dana wasn’t about to be joining them anytime soon, Howie plunked his chair down in time to see Alice guilty freeze in the process of putting a forkful of the eggs from his plate into her mouth. “Eat it,” Howie waved his hands. “I don’t even like eggs when Marta cooks them.”
“Yay!” Alice did a little dance in her seat and unceremoniously dumped the eggs onto her plate. Shoving more into her mouth, she mumbled around them, “You should just tell her. Like you did with me. I’ve already talked to her and I figure she knows but she’s well” Alice shrugged and took a drink of juice.
“Steeped in denial?” said Howie sarcastically.
Instead of replying, Alice made a noise of agreement and did a sheepish shrug then went about eating the remaining pile of eggs on her plate with a speed that almost horrified Howie. He didn’t know it was possible to intake food that quickly. Just as he started to make a response, Dana breezed back in the room with a frying pan that apparently had pancakes on it. She put the largest pancake on Alice’s plate who released an ecstatic food muffled cry of joy. The athlete paused at Howie’s plate and lifted an eyebrow as she placed his pancake on it.
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Sorry you had to repost because of all that editing stuff. Such a bummer. But this chapter is so freaking good. Seriously. The comedy was pricless: Fabulous Howie, the pancake breakfast burrito, Tonya’s surname and the angst was just so…dead-on. I love Gabby.
I can’t wait to see what happens next i do hope that alie sees dana before she does angthing silly with gabby because she is so bad for alice and alice alway ends up hurt please post soon
I so badly wanna see the whole “Be a Man” revue on film. That’s priceless comedy right there. Good work.
“And to be frank, you wouldn’t like Tonya when she was angry. You wouldn’t like her at all.” ROFLMAO…you are sooo talented!
I love this, really, I can’t wait for the next chapter.
hey drieser, i haven’t commented in awhile (my old username was danielle), and just thought i’d jump back in. firstly, i have to tell you that i am loving the way that you are writing howie… is he not the cutest kid brother or what?! i enjoyed that last chapter and how he over hears dana and alice having sex and complains about being corrupted.
and this time, him being all upset with her fans, lol. the mulan thing with ed was hilarious… where do you come up with these crazy scenarios?! i can’t believed that you brought the wonderful world of disney to Pride, lmao.
anyway, i am feeling alice’s pain right now, but i hope she does not let herself fall into the evil clutches of gabby deveaux.
i hope she and dane work it out and end up having some more great sex… and just for shits and giggles, howie should overhear them again.
but wait a minute?! when the heck is howie going to come out to her? i’ll be waiting…
oh and i almost forgot… when you busted out that SNL sketch with sean connery and alex trebbeck i nearly pissed myself… i cannot tell you how much laughter those sketches bring me, i love them.
ok, i have prattled on enough now, love your writing.. Do Go On!!!!
Thought you had posted early for a moment. Didn’t have a chance to comment on this chapter first time round though, so let me say: Alice and Howie, “Don’t you think you could use the practice saying the words” – I loved this scene, funny and tender; the breakfast burrito, and Dana’s reaction, made me laugh (once I googled Fruit Loops to find out what they were); and the ripping guitar solo, let’s just say the image distracted me from my work for quite a while. I know the angst must be coming, but looking forward to the next chapter.
Lovely once again. You really left it hanging there with the end. Trying to torture the Danishers, eh? I suppose it is for the best though. Wouldn’t be a good story with Gabby inflicting a little drama. Can’t wait for the update.