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The Long and Winding Road – chp 6
“We really should get back to the others “
Bette said after she had stared at Tina for several minutes just re-acquainting herself with her lovely face.
“8pm at your hotel ? “
“Yes – and Tina – not a word to Alice “
“I may have been acting like I have lost my marbles lately but I haven’t gone totally wacky “
Tina and Bette finally broke the spell they felt they were in and went back to mingle with the others. After an hour Tina was talking to Kit – if any of the others had opinions about Tina’s behaviour none of them brought it up at the funeral. Tina was shocked at Kit’s pregnancy and had been questioning her about her health — she was very fond of the woman she regarded as her sister in law .
All the time that Tina was chatting she was watching Bette for signs of tiredness becoming too much for her. Finally she had picked up enough clues to decided that the best place for Bette was being back at her hotel. She made her way through the crowd and lent into Bette to whisper.
“Why don’t I drive you to your hotel Bette ? “
Bette turned and smiled at Tina.
“That would be great Tina “
“Have you made arrangements to see the others ? “
“Lunch tomorrow “
“Okay – I will go and bring my car round “
Tina slipped out quietly and in five minutes had pulled up outside the Planet. She got out of the
car and grinned – Bette was going to get a kick out of this.
Bette walked slowly out and laughed – music to Tina’s ears.
“A Saab Tina ? “
“I loved your car – I saw this about six months ago – Henry had just written off my Porche “
“A Porche ? “
“I got a huge pay bonus from my job – I went out and bought it on a whim – Henry went mad – called it a death trap “
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(52 votes, average: 4.48 out of 5)
Great chapter…am really enjoying your new story!
T’s so sweet, wish someone can spoil me like that.
A full out gold card treatment? Must be nice. But will it sway a reluctant Bette?
Gogo, Tina! I could never drive a gleaming white car. I’m too lazy to keep the exterior clean so it would always look like shit. I wonder if Henry is gone for good or would that be too easy? ;)
Great Chapter. I really love this new story. You write it so well. Thank you Please Post Soon
So cute… made me happy after a rough day and returned the smile to my face. Thanks, and looking forward to more!
What can I say? Let it happen in Season 4!!!
its hard for me to decide which one is more addictive this one or the l wingi guess both coz you have me hooked
Yay!!!
Yay, go Tina! I love this new story! But I also love your other one!
Tina is so nice and definitly she wants gorgeus Bette Porter back! what will do Henry i hope Tina won’t be in troubles. your both stories are amazing
Swift Kennard!!! She certainly ain;t gonna let the grass grow under her feet!!! Great chapter. Oh BTW, I understand, congratulations may be in order….
I LOVE IT., go tina!!!!!!!! Give her the all out Porter treatment and charm her pants off.
Operation Porter has commenced. Let the pampering begin. Goodby Henry and don’t let the door hit you in the gluteus. I can only dream and wish on a star or anything else that this would happen in season 4. I would love for it to happen on the first show of the season that way I can stare at Bette and Tina and not feel like I have to run and be sick. Who do I pray to for this to happen?
You go Tina!!!Waiting for the spoiling.. Excellent as usual, Ally.. post soon!!!
you go girl… love this… please more more more
Tina is beening so sweet,yet she has hurt Henry the same way that she hurt Bette. Some tines that will catch up with you. She should get rid of Henry before chasing Bette, Let her be fair and honest this time around. thanks
ally..you are remarkable! I hope that Henry is just gone…no drama for our girls in that area. enjoy your weekend and post as soon as you can.
Yes ‘Operation Porter’, come on T lets get her back to LA and back into your arms!!! Great post ally
great. a wirlwind romance about to happen? but why do i think Henry will be waiting for T?
I só love this story! Henry disappearing just like that would be way too easy now wouldn’t it :-). Please don’t let Tina find out she’s pregnant or something..
Love the story.
Great job Ally. Apparently Henry isn’t as dumb as he looks, because he can admit to himself that he never truly had Tina. I love the point of view of this story with Tina chasing and romancing Bette to get her back. Way to flip the script Ally. Please continue :o)
yay! I like that Bette and Tina are finding their way back in both of your stories!
That’s it for Henry? No fight at all? Man, that was easy. Ally, you are soooo British, gardening, FA cup and beer! I bet when the world cup starts we will hardly see your post then. LOL… Nice update, please continue when you are freeeeee. Cheers mate
Operation Porter, i love how it sounds, i hope tina can win bette back…this story is great and i’m so glad to know that a fellow tibetter is writing it
“I want you back”…those magical words but why is Bette so reluctant? Well, I guess I’ll just have to wait and see. Great post as always.
This story is delightful. Why is Bette being so reluctant? Does she have a sweetie or a potential one back in London? She has a good life in London and doesn’t want to give it up? Who knows if some other bloke will catch Tina’s eye? Can’t they just have mind-blowing sex and call it a day? LOL.
Ally – thank you this is how Tina should behave – woo your woman.
Just wonderful. I am too tired to say anything more eloquent or profound, sorry. As always I love your writing and can’t wait for more. (Although I understand that watching Liverpool win the FA Cup is a pleasure hard to refuse!)
awww cute!!
I LOVE THIS FIC……CONTINUE SOON…..WITH “OPERATION PORTER”………
“GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TINA”
OMG, go Tina! This is one of the best things go happen to the two of them.Your writing encourages me to write lovely poetry. beautiful!
Win her back! T !
Yeah T needs to woo Bette big time. Liked the comment about the FA Cup, watched it with lots of alcoholic beverages. Walk on, walk on….
Yeah go Tina go get your wife back and take care of her. Ok now Tina just go back to her house or whatever is it and break up with henryass and go be with Bette. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Come on Tina, get yourself together and go out there and get the love of your life back! Bette can’t resist you…….. Please post soon.
Thanks for a great update, please give them a chance…
Oh yeah! Operation Porter sounds exciting! ^_^ More, soon, pls. Didn’t know u are a cricket fan, ally. Looks like England are going to have it easy. Really dissapointed with our team’s performance. Oh well, there’s always ur writing to cheer me up ;-)
LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
Ally, I just love this story…and now that I have been reading your bio, well girl, I’m falling hard for you ;)