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The Beginning of a friendship, chpt 28
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*Geez…. This song hit home in an incredible way… al the doubt I ever felt came to the surface and I felt devistated, just mumbling along with the lyrics and my eyes stil closed*
Once again I’m thinking about
Taking the easy way out
*Straight AND taken… WHAT ELSE CAN I DO?*
But if I let you go I will never know
What my life would be, holding you close to me
*Oh Tina*
Will I ever see you smiling back at me?
How will I know
If I let you go
*I love you so much*
But if I let you go I will never know
Will I ever see you smiling back at me?
*I just dont want to lose you*
How will I know
if I let you go ?
I sighed as the song was over and opened my eyes, instantly wiping away the tear that had managed to make his way to my cheek after all… Then I heard the doorbell…
Ding Dong
‘Ah well… Pizza is always great when you’re heartbroken’
The sarcastic tone in my voice was even obvious to a deaf man…
*Right Porter… who are you kidding*
Tina:
It was just a 10, 15 minute drive to Bettes appartment… But when I reached her place I hesitated… What would she think if I just showed up on her doorstep? Bags and all? I just sat in my car and thought about the mess I’d gotten myself into…
*Great, Tina… Oh F*ck!*
I checked my swelling cheek in the mirror and sighed deeply… I could just let the bags in the car and visit her… Ask about her knee… See how she responds to that… My heart pounded at the idea of just walking to that womans door and ring the doorbell, and when I finally got out of my car my knees felt weak…
*God, I’m exhausted*
*Like that’s the only reason*
*Why do you always have thoughts at the moments you don’t want them?*
It seemed I took longer to reach the door from my car than to reach her appartment from my (former) house…
I peeked through the window and… There she was… The relieve of just seeing her made me realize how nervous I was and I just trembled, standing there awestruck by the her ravishing beauty.. She was clearly singing along with some songs and with an enthusiasm you wouldnt expect from her…
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finally wow glad sorry its me walks changed my name so great post but westlefe really lol
yeah… sorry… I usually don’t like songs in fanfic, but then this is the second chapter with a song in it… It was just soooo right :)
Again f*cking awsome. Je hebt er weer eentje mooi bij elkaar gebreid, je gevoelens stop je in je keybord en die druipen daarna van mijn scherm. Heerlijk om te lezen. Bedankt daarvoor.
OMG we got a chapter this weekend! WEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I wonder if Bette was singing off-key with the radio? If she was and I had been in Tina’s place watching her through the window, I would’ve probably rolled on the ground laughing my butt off. lol
As an addict, I’m needing a larger fix and 2 a day…see this is what you have made me into…desperate for this beautiful story you are writing. They are exactly as I would love them, pls don’t skip a thing however long it takes, tks!!!
Im not worry if you take care of me too lol. Anyway this is so good and awesome, yeah let Bette take care of you Tina and you will be happy with her. Ok let them have a talk and see how thing go. OK post soon please, thanks!
ok the search is still on!!!!!!!! Now bette should cut off his balls and hand them to him or he should be sleeping with the fishes butter yet bette put a hoarse head in his bed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! longer
wow i love this story… now please note i am back to work… and when i read at work i can’t comment… but know i am always reading… this is one of my favorites… bring on the love babe…
too much crying and NOT ENUFF TALKING!!!!!!! AND NOT FORGETTING A KISS OR 2…..do ya get me drift lassie????? LOL!!!!!!!!
thanks for this chapter just glad you liked my picture and thankyou foe sending me some of your catch you soon
Awwww… BEAUTIFUL! Aren’t they just cute or what. Oh man, since you know I’m an addict, so don’t forget my daily fix, I mean DAILY!!! NO is not an answer, do you read me?! Lol… Pardon me, I will behave myself if I get what I want. Lol… please continue
love this story. and now they are where they need to be, together. Thank you for the post.
this was great but i’m still waiting for a kiss LOL…B&T are so right for each other, they are already in each other’s arms, just a little push ;)
This slow bringing together of Bette and Tina is wonderfully agonizing. The way you tell this story is brilliant. I just love it–have I mentioned that lately. Post soon please!
I hoppe that YOUR knee is okay. Did you have to put a needle in and drain it? Bette singing to this song and thinking as she did was funny and sad at the same time. It took a lot of courage for Tina to make it to Bette’s house and actually ring the door bell. Bette must be in heaven to be holding her sleeping beauty in her arms. I know that I would be. Great chapter.
Tina shouldn’t be wasting time sleeping, she should be kissing!! Hope to see them happily together in the next chapter, maybe TODAY??? Thanks for your story.
Hi, I finally catched up on your story! Djeezes, I missed a whole lot in these twelve days of vacation! Anyway, great progress with the story! Loved all the chappies! Continue soon please!
Well well…I must say.. :) This lunchbreak in suddenly getting much much better…thanks for a great chapter and you have mad my day…again…post soon please…
Just amazing – just catching up on your story…..this is sooo good. Keep going, this is wonderfull :o)
W-O-W~~ GREAT chappy… Nobody will ever know if all ‘taking the easy way out’ ;) and then all will be guessing for the rest of our lives…
waooooo! girl you know how melt us! this last part was so swet! maybe Tina should have a talk with Bette about her feelings i know maybe is soon but with Tina in home this will be better! i love this story! take care
Take care of your knees I have two knee repartment in May last yrs. So be careful. Eric is a bully.Most men can beat up a woman, Takes a good one to walk away. He will get his just dues. Pay back is a bitch. thanks
Another great chapter, thanks. I love this story, it melts my heart:-) Ben je trouwens tweetalig ofzo? Ik zou me (als Nederlandse) nooit zo goed in het Engels kunnen uitdrukken, complimenten! I hope you’ll post another chapter soon!