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    Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B

    Story written on November 10, 2008 by PortiaOnly.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=71575
    Author Notes:

    Bette is ready to sing “Take this job and shove it”; Shane goes back to Oregon to deal with her family; Dana and Alice make final preparations; Dylan and Helena recall something from their past; Tina and Bette have dinner and dessert.

    I know your image of me is what I hope to be, baby
    I’ve treated you unkindly (“Never again, Tee.  Never,” Bette said. )

    But girl can’t you see
    There’s no one more important to me     (“No one, baby,” Bette whispered in Tina’s ear.)
    So darling can’t you please see through me
    ’cause we’re alone now and I’m singin’ my song for you

    They danced so close that they were nose to nose, smiling at each other in a relaxed, comforting way.  No baby, no phone calls, no troubles.  Bette had made her decision with Tina’s help.  All she felt right now was hopeful.  Tina’s hand slipped behind Bette’s head, pulled her close as she leaned in.  Tina’s mouth opened, her tongue slithered out, and pushed past Bette’s closed lips, into her mouth, deep into it.  Her tongue danced there and Bette joined in, their heads moving left and right trying to capture everything the other offered.  Bette’s hand was splayed now, resting just below Tina’s waist.  Ray sang:

     

    You taught me precious secrets of the truth, withholdin’ nothin’
    You came out in front and I was hiding
    But now I’m so much better so if my words don’t come together
    Listen to the melody cause my love is in there hiding

     

    I love you in a place where there’s no space or time
    I love you for my life, ’cause you’re a friend of mine
    And when my life is over, remember when we were together
    We were alone and I was singin’ my song for you

    The kiss halted briefly and Tina’s left hand scratched down Bette’s arm, leaving tiny pink lines on her skin.  The little lines were visible, but every time Tina scratched her like that, there was this tingle and a tightening in Bette’s loins, too—something invisible, but no less real.  She loved it when Tina did that, even in public, Bette could become so easily aroused by it.  Tonight, she had been turned on for hours and hours.  Tina’s nails sliding down her arm only enhanced how ready she was to be with her.  Bette’s eyes began to tear.  All evening, Tina had shown how much she loved and understood her.  She hoped to be that same kind of partner, lover, and companion for Tina.  She felt it and wanted Tina to know she did.  As her hands traveled up and down Tina’s back, then took her hand, held Tina’s fingers curled in hers, they danced slower and slower together.  She kissed Tina again and the two of them swallowed each other’s sweet sounds of love.  Bette broke away and sang with Ray:

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    1. ‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!

    4. OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…

    5. Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)

    8. Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.

    11. Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.

    12. I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS

    14. I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.

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