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    Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 29B

    Story written on November 10, 2008 by PortiaOnly.
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    Story Shortlink: https://www.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=71575
    Author Notes:

    Bette is ready to sing “Take this job and shove it”; Shane goes back to Oregon to deal with her family; Dana and Alice make final preparations; Dylan and Helena recall something from their past; Tina and Bette have dinner and dessert.

     

    "Fuck," Bette said softly.  She felt her stomach tighten in anticipation. 

     

    Tina smiled before she stood up straight again.  She wiped the knowing grin off her face before turning around.  "What?"

     

    Bette’s eyes were hooded and her slight sway told Tina that Bette still had a good buzz going on.  "How long do I have to be in here by myself?"

     

    Tina placed her dress and stockings on the toilet seat lid and let Bette help her inside the shower.

     

    "Ah, nice and warm," Tina commented about the water.


    Bette’s arms were around her and she held her close.  "Yeah, I was just going to say that."

     

    * * * * *

    Shane was standing naked in the kitchen drinking a Corona and staring out the window.  Carmen walked into the room laughing and Shane turned to her.  "What’s so funny?"

     

    "Hell if I know," she said and laughed some more.

     

    "You’re stoned.”  Shane shook her head at her.  “Did you know it was raining?" 

     

    "Uh-huh.  I felt rain coming all day today.  The Rain Goddess told me."  Carmen couldn’t stop laughing.

     

    "That Shaman ancestry you’ve got, huh?"

     

    "Yeah, that’s right."  Carmen giggled.  "Be scared.

     

    Shane pulled from beer again.  "Want some?"

     

    Carmen shook her head, but walked over to her.  "You know what I’d love to do right now?"

     

    "What?"

     

    "I’d love to go for a swim in the rain.  I’ve never been high and swam in the rain.  I need to do that.  I need to do that right now."  Carmen walked to the backdoor and opened it.  "Are you going to swim naked with me in the rain, Shane?  Uh-oh, I made a rhyme.  In the rain, with Shane, cause I’m feelin’ no pain, and I’m not insane."

     

    "You’re not?"

     

    Carmen walked out.  "Goin’ swimmin’, Mami."  She walked out and raced down the deck to the fence that separated Tina and Bette’s backyard from their back.  Shane was right behind her, running to keep Carmen from doing something stupid or hurting herself.  A swim in the rain sounded like it might be fun as long as Tina and Bette weren’t home.  She didn’t want to disturb them.  Ahead, she heard Carmen say, "Bane, cane, fein . . . is fein a word?  Gain, Shane, Jane, main, Shane, Shane, uh. . . Shane and let’s see . . . wane, zane. Zany.  Shaney-zany."  Carmen snapped her fingers and danced as she made her rhymes.

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    1. ‘ she looked at Tina and playfully accused, “Cougar.” ‘ – LOL – Tina certainly has come a long way from the first pages of ‘Laid Up’. – PortiaO, Thank you very much for producing all those wonderful pages!

    4. OH MY FUCKING GOD… that was … i have no words… i wish it didn’t end… that a scene i pray we see in the last eppy… loved it… and what a book you have here… it took a while to read… but i did…

    5. Wow, I don’t know what to say. The detail you give to each character and storyline is breathtaking. What a beautiful imagination you have. I love your writing so much that I even wanted Helena’s and Dylan’s past life story to never end :). I’m a little bit nervous that someting will happen to Shay before Shane can take custody. Who’s the mystery man at Alice and Dana’s wedding? A long lost relative of Alice’s? Wow, Bette and Tina, effing hot. Thank you so much for the update. Don’t be gone too long :)

    8. Portia… translating “thank you” into all the known languages on this planet wouldn’t be enough at this point. I know I type it, and I certainly mean it, but it lacks… I don’t know anything else to say but that, though. So, again, thank you. You manage to get everything in there, and I don’t know why, but the “Sweatin to the 80’s” line made me giggle, a lot. You have a very visual style of writing, I’m right there with the characters. I see them, hear them perfectly. I love the way you write, I love this story. Thanks (again) for sharing with us.

    11. Yes, you’ve got me googling folks that don’t exist. You’ve created an entire world, fleshed it out and populated it with people whose lives are fully integrated into it. You’ve made TLW, “Do what it (should)do”.

    12. I have totally been floored by this story!! this last chapter totally knocked my socks off!!! I’m so glad Bette had the change of heart about mo…. this should be really interesting! PPS

    14. I miss this story. :( It’s so awesome and realistic. And it shows so much growth in the characters while staying true to them at the same time. And the storylines are just fantastic. *sigh* Yeah, I miss this story.

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